Once i open i time there lived seven sisters and they made and all of thar kites looked beautifull and they all went to i hlil and
Ther was no wind and they went sleep and at nignt time and there kites flyed i way and the little stster woke up and she cryed and all the sisters woke up and all of the kites were gone and then they looked up in the sky and the kites were shning like the sky and the end of the matariki story
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Well done Gabriel. I love how many sentences you have written all by yourself. I am very proud of you my boy.
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ReplyDeleteTher was no wind and they went sleep and at nignt time and there kites flyed i way and the little stster woke up and she cryed and all the sisters woke up and all of the kites were gone and then they looked up in the sky and the kites were shning like the sky and the end of the matariki story
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Hi Gabriel. Wow! I am very impressed with your story you wrote. I am proud of you.
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