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Tuesday 12 June 2018

Matariki

Once i open i time there lived  seven sisters and they made and all of thar kites  looked beautifull and they all went to i hlil and

Ther was no wind and they went sleep and at nignt time and there kites flyed i way and the little stster woke up and she cryed and all the  sisters woke up and all of the kites were gone and then they looked up in the sky and the kites were shning like the sky and the end of the matariki story
kites

3 comments:

  1. Well done Gabriel. I love how many sentences you have written all by yourself. I am very proud of you my boy.

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  2. Once i open i time there lived seven sisters and they made and all of thar kites looked beautifull and they all went to i hlil and
    Ther was no wind and they went sleep and at nignt time and there kites flyed i way and the little stster woke up and she cryed and all the sisters woke up and all of the kites were gone and then they looked up in the sky and the kites were shning like the sky and the end of the matariki story
    kites

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  3. Hi Gabriel. Wow! I am very impressed with your story you wrote. I am proud of you.

    From Miss Szymanik

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