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Friday, 22 May 2020

Gabriel Rainbows End Writing task

Rainbows End

Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs
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Instructions

Did you know, Miss West has NEVER been on a roller coaster!? Write a story about the first time Miss West visited Rainbows End and went on a roller coaster.

OR 

Write a recount about a time you have been to Rainbows End.

Ideas to use
Times: Before the roller coaster ride. During the roller coaster ride. After the roller coaster ride.
Feelings: Scared/ nervous, excited/ happy
Roller coaster vocabulary: train, car, lapbar or harness, track, circuit
People: Instructor/guide, Friends/ Family, Miss West



Try to use some or all of these words in your writing:
nervous
thumping heart
wobbled

screamed
exhilarating
gulped

wind in my face
whistled
chatter

shuddered
flying
windswept



Start Writing below



One sunny morning, Miss West decided it was time to face her fears and go on a roller coaster for the very first time. She packed a bag for the day, got in her car and headed off to Rainbows End...and when she made it she went to her first ride and  so she hopped on but she did it no that it was a long one so the man and girl said goodbye and then they went like WOOSH and it was going fast and then it went slow and then it was going up and then went down fast as like a lamborghini and when they made it back Miss west was rollercoaster sick she was about throw up but she had to hold it in she said to herself woah. When they had 2 more rides it was time to go back so she had to go and they went off.

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