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Thursday 21 May 2020

story starter

Story Starter…
White Water Rafting
Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs


Instructions
Use the photo above to write a story about how you survived in whitewater rafting. 


Ideas to use
Times: Before hoping inside the raft.  During the rushing waters. After the raft maneuvered .
Feelings: heart pounding, soaked to the skin, keep your head above water, man overboard, fear of the unknown
Things: Raft, helmet, life-jacket, paddle, boots, turbulent waters, dangerous drops, 
Places: roars of the rapids, boulders, fast moving waters, crushing waves, 
People: Rafter guide,  
Verbs: Paddle, maneuver, overboard, soaked, 


Start Writing below



“Are you coming or not?” she/he demanded as she/he took a few steps further into the...boat and we started to put on our gear so we can go and i was ready to go and off we went it was slow but when we reached the waves we started to go up and down and i thought it was about to fall down into the water and we were stole  going up and down and  we made it  and it was time for the other group.

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